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Achucoul Posted 11 years ago
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Grammar correction please

Dear Mr. Phillip,

Thanks for showing your interest in our products. After receiving your mail, I was trying to reach your telephone. But no one could pick up my call. As soon as you see this mail, Kindly get back to me on my mobile number. We shall discuss about your requirements.
  

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Dear Mr. Phillip, Thank you for showing an interest in our products. After receiving your letter, I tried to reach you by telephone; but no one answered my call.

  • Dear Mr.
  • Phillip, Thank you for showing an interest in our products.
  • After receiving your letter, I tried to reach you by telephone; but no one answered my call.
  • Upon receiving this letter , kindly call me at my mobile number.
  • We can then discuss your requirements.
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Dear Mr. Phillip,
Thank you for showing an interest in our products. After receiving your letter, I tried to reach you by telephone; but no one answered my call. Upon receiving this letter, kindly call me at my mobile number. We can then discuss your requirements.

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achucoulAfter receiving your mail,
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