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Ilma Posted 14 years ago

Grammar correction please :)

I saw him
Walking through the rain
Walking through the pains

I saw him
Tried to be survive
With nothing to hold on
Nothing to lay on

Here he was
And he faded away

I call him,
the man of the wind
  

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Hi, As I said, strict grammar rules don' t really apply to poetry. Clive

— Clive

  • Hi, As I said, strict grammar rules don' t really apply to poetry.
  • Clive
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Hi,

As I said, strict grammar rules don' t really apply to poetry.

Clive
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The only serious issue I have with it is 'Tried to be survive'. Get rid of the be I say!
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