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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Grammar correction please

The inspection date for both 1,000 pcs of T67and 2,000 pcs are on December 17th. You would like to ship them on December if the inspection is passed? Or kept them as the originally planned to ship half quantities for both shipments on December and the rest quantities on January 2009? Your LC amount has covered full shipments. Please confirm.

  

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Hi, The inspection date for both 1,000 pcs of T67and 2,000 pcs are <<< the subject is singular on December 17th. You would like to <<< You need to use the word sequence for a question ship them on December if the inspection is passed? Or kept <<< incorrect verb form them as the originally planned to ship half quantities for both shipments on December and the rest quantities on January 2009?

  • Hi, The inspection date for both 1,000 pcs of T67and 2,000 pcs are <<< the subject is singular on December 17th.
  • You would like to <<< You need to use the word sequence for a question ship them on December if the inspection is passed?
  • Or kept <<< incorrect verb form them as the originally planned to ship half quantities for both shipments on December and the rest quantities on January 2009?
  • Your LC amount has covered full shipments.
  • Please confirm.
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Hi,
The inspection date for both 1,000 pcs of T67and 2,000 pcs are <<< the subject is singular on December 17th. You would like to <<< You need to use the word sequence for a question ship them on December if the inspection is passed? Or kept <<< incorrect verb form them as the originally planned to ship half quantities for both shipments on December and t
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Hi Clive,

Thanks for your guide. Here is my correction, please review again. Thanks

1,000 pcs of T67 and 2,000 pcs of G789 will be inspected on December 17th. Do you like to ship both shipments in full quantities if the inspection is passed? Or you would like to keep them as originally planned for half the quantities from each order on December, the rest to be shipped by January
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Hi,
Here is my correction, please review again. Thanks


1,000 pcs of T67 and 2,000 pcs of G789 will be inspected on December 17th. Would you like us to ship both shipments in full quantities if the inspection is passed? Or you would like to keep them as originally planned for half the quantities from each order on December, the rest to be shipped by January 2009? Your LC
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Clive, Thank you so much!

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