Grammar Correction for My Motivation Letter

So I hold a deep interest to join a summer school program in Taiwan. And I have to send my motivation letter to apply for the program.

Is there anyone could help to find grammatically mistakes on the letter that I made?

Bunch of thanks from me:D

Here is my letter :

With this letter, I would like to express my interest for taking part in xxxx as a representative for xxxxx. I am currently a first year student on xxxx and I do hold a deep interest on learning Taiwanese culture with a goal to extend my knowledge about Taiwanese culture and make new friends from around the world.

Since I was a little, I always be that one person who have a lot of curiosity about the world outside Indonesia and wanting to learn and grasp more about it directly. And for me, culture is such an interesting subject to be learned since there are many cultures in this world and each country has their own unique culture. Thus, this desire of mine had motivated me to register myself on this program.

Taichung City, as far as I know, is the most livable city in Taiwan instead of the capital city, Taipei. There are several reasons why Taiwan became the most livable city in Taiwan. The first one is its culture and arts, this city has one of the biggest art museum in Asia, annual outdoor jazz festival attracting international acts, rainbow village which is preserved by a 93-year-old man and many more. The second one is the awesome night markets offering Taiwanese culinary like noodles, desserts, stinky tofu and the best bubble tea in town. The last one become the most important one is the weather, when summer comes, Taichung will become so lovely and you will see many local citizens at parks, markets, festivals or just come out to enjoy the sunny skies.

By this letter, I will also tell my SWOT analysis because my SWOT play a big role in motivating me to be a better person. I’m the type of person who always want to learn something new and being open minded to new things. I always look at ways of doing something better and increasing my own store of knowledge and experience. I also enjoy planning my life in the future, as an example, I already have a plan what I’m going to do in the next 4 years in the college and I will try my best to stick on it. Yet, I realized that there is also a weakness in myself. I hardly adapt on new society, this weakness also encourages me to start practice adapting on new society like what this program does. Yet, this weakness doesn’t make me become an introvert person, indeed I’m a very friendly and outgoing person with bags of energy and enthusiasm.

I have been active and involved in something that I really like. When I was in junior high school and senior high school, I have become a representative for my school on a couple of events, elected to became Student’ Council Vice President, xxxx Project Officer, and xxxx Secure and License Committee. And on college, I’m currently involved on several international scoop events, such as xxxx 2017 and xxxx 2017. Nonetheless, I’m not only involved on international scoop events but also a national scoop event such as xxxxx 2017.

Hence, If I get accepted on this program, I believe it will give me a priceless experience and has a lot of benefits both for me and my surrounding. Because I can share my experience with my friends and apply the positive experience on a daily basis.