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Misse Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Grammar correction

Hi! Everyone ,I just need a hand for my grammar correction. Thank you in advance

The Professors of University should show a professionalism and update their instructional materials to impart better learning

The Government should not allow the significant workers to have a strike, since they are the people that we need incase of emergency

The London Library is sickening. Because of the foul smell of garbage, unorganized book section and their poor service
  

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Misse Hi! Everyone ,I just need a hand for my grammar correction. Thank you in advanceThe Professors of University should show a professionalism and update their instructional materials to impart better learningThe Government should not allow the significant workers to have a strike, since they are the people that we need incase of emergencyThe London Library is sickening.

  • Misse Hi!
  • Everyone ,I just need a hand for my grammar correction.
  • Thank you in advanceThe Professors of University should show a professionalism and update their instructional materials to impart better learningThe Government should not allow the significant workers to have a strike, since they are the people that we need incase of emergencyThe London Library is sickening.
  • Because of the foul smell of garbage, unorganized book section and their poor service I would rewrite it as follows; University professors should be professional enough to update their instructional materials to enhance learning.
  • The government should not allow the significant workers to go on a strike as they should be in duty in case of emergency.
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Misse Hi! Everyone ,I just need a hand for my grammar correction. Thank you in advanceThe Professors of University should show a professionalism and update their instructional materials to impart better learningThe Government should not allow the significant workers to have a strike, since they are the people that we need incase of emergencyThe London Library is sickening
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Hrsanei, thank you for helping me! yeah I think my sentences are not yet good enough, even I find it a little bit awkward.Emotion: smile

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