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Tscalasal Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Grammar, chioce of words - spelling.

" Mining titles are awarded in areas available to applicants who meet the requirements of this Law and other relevant legislation.
Applicants for mining titles, taking the form of a comercial society, including the identification of shareholders and their respective (value) participation of the subscribed capital."

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I suppose this is what you mean: Mining rights are awarded in available areas to applicants who meet the requirements of this law and other relevant legislation. Applicants for mining rights taking the form of a commercial society should include identification of shareholders and their respective contributions to the subscribed capital.

  • I suppose this is what you mean: Mining rights are awarded in available areas to applicants who meet the requirements of this law and other relevant legislation.
  • Applicants for mining rights taking the form of a commercial society should include identification of shareholders and their respective contributions to the subscribed capital.
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I suppose this is what you mean:

Mining rights are awarded in available areas to applicants who meet the requirements of this law and other relevant legislation.

Applicants for mining rights taking the form of a commercial society should include identification of shareholders and their respective contributions to the subscribed capital.
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I'm studying the law and trying to reformulate some Articles. It is especially difficult because I did not write the law. The goal is to create harmonious paragraphs without changing the context; considering the use of proper English language. Something like that ... hehe sorry, a little complex.

EXample: I did not understand "value of the subcribed capital" - maybe I can understand t
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Maybe:

... " and their respective share contribution to the subscribed capital" ?
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tscalasal" and their respective share contribution to the subscribed capital" ?
OK.

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