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Asta Maria Posted 9 years ago
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Kang So-ju, a policewoman who possesses a strong sense of justice, dares to fight against powerful elites who create menace in the society!

  

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Kang So-ju, a policewoman who possesses a strong sense of justice, dares to fight against powerful elites who create menace in the society! The grammar is OK, but it could benefit from some improvement in style. Kang So-ju, a policewoman with a strong sense of justice, fights powerful elites who are a menace to society .

  • Kang So-ju, a policewoman who possesses a strong sense of justice, dares to fight against powerful elites who create menace in the society!
  • The grammar is OK, but it could benefit from some improvement in style.
  • Kang So-ju, a policewoman with a strong sense of justice, fights powerful elites who are a menace to society .
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Asta MariaIs this grammatically correct?Kang So-ju, a policewoman who possesses a strong sense of justice, dares to fight against powerful elites who create menace in the society!

The grammar is OK, but it could benefit from some improvement in style.

Kang So-ju, a policewoman with a strong sense of justice,

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