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Sobhan Assian Posted 14 years ago
Business & Finance

Grammar checking

Dear Members;

pls check the following sentence of me and let me know whether it is correct or not?

They created a coordination mechanism which induces the buyer to reserve more units from the supplier rather than he will do in a decentralized system, so that the expected profit of global system is maximized by the individual members’ optimal decisions.

Regards;
Sobhan
  

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They've created a coordination mechanism which helps the buyer to reserve more units from the supplier compared to the decentralized system. Thus, the expected profit of global system is maximized by the individual member's optimized decisions. Regards, Sobhan

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  • They've created a coordination mechanism which helps the buyer to reserve more units from the supplier compared to the decentralized system.
  • Thus, the expected profit of global system is maximized by the individual member's optimized decisions.
  • Regards, Sobhan
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They've created a coordination mechanism which helps the buyer to reserve more units from the supplier compared to the decentralized system. Thus, the expected profit of global system is maximized by the individual member's optimized decisions.

Regards,
Sobhan
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