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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Grammar checking
Dear teachers,
I've just written up a paragraph for my assignment (Please find the paragraph below, for your easy reading, I have broken the paragraph into 5 sentences). Before handing in the assignment,I wonder if you could kindly correct the grammatical mistakes for me or not.
(1) The occupational training services have been commenced since 1996 in Eddy Mak Memorial Complex for serving the people suffering from mental illness.
(2) In response to the urgent training needs, we extended the training to the catering industry in the year of 2004.
(3) The catering training placements have been regarded as a very popular training mode as it facilitates the open employment opportunity for our service users.
(4) Nevertheless, unfortunately we received the warning from Food and Environmental Hygiene Department in April 2010 that we could not run our catering training in our outside café and we were strongly advised to apply the license.
(5) After deliberation the Headquarter considered to convert the staff canteen which has been idling for over 5 years, to a catering training venue.
Million thanks!!!!!
Cheers,
John
I've just written up a paragraph for my assignment (Please find the paragraph below, for your easy reading, I have broken the paragraph into 5 sentences). Before handing in the assignment,I wonder if you could kindly correct the grammatical mistakes for me or not.
(1) The occupational training services have been commenced since 1996 in Eddy Mak Memorial Complex for serving the people suffering from mental illness.
(2) In response to the urgent training needs, we extended the training to the catering industry in the year of 2004.
(3) The catering training placements have been regarded as a very popular training mode as it facilitates the open employment opportunity for our service users.
(4) Nevertheless, unfortunately we received the warning from Food and Environmental Hygiene Department in April 2010 that we could not run our catering training in our outside café and we were strongly advised to apply the license.
(5) After deliberation the Headquarter considered to convert the staff canteen which has been idling for over 5 years, to a catering training venue.
Million thanks!!!!!
Cheers,
John
Top answer
Hi, (1) The occupational training services began in 1996 ,in the Eddy Mak Memorial Complex. to serve people suffering from mental illness. (2) In response to urgent needs, we extended the training to the catering industry in the year of 2004.
- Hi, (1) The occupational training services began in 1996 ,in the Eddy Mak Memorial Complex.
- to serve people suffering from mental illness.
- (2) In response to urgent needs, we extended the training to the catering industry in the year of 2004.
- (3) The catering training placements have been regarded as a very popular training mode, as they facilitate open employment opportunities for our service users.
- (4) Nevertheless, and unfortunately, we received aa warning from the Food and Environmental Hygiene Department in April 2010 that we could not run our catering training in our outside café.
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Hi,
(1) The occupational training services began in 1996 ,in the Eddy Mak Memorial Complex. to serve people suffering from mental illness.
(2) In response to urgent needs, we extended the training to the catering industry in the year of 2004.
(3) The catering
(1) The occupational training services began in 1996 ,in the Eddy Mak Memorial Complex. to serve people suffering from mental illness.
(2) In response to urgent needs, we extended the training to the catering industry in the year of 2004.
(3) The catering
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