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Rita Ngan Posted 6 years ago
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Subject: <Reminder> XXX ERP (1) Management of customer relationship (2) Management of Quotation - August 18, 2020

Please be reminded to attend the course for XXX ERP which will be provided by Company A on August 18, 2020 at 09:00 in the Conference Room.

The designated colleagues are:

Department A

Carol

Department B

Michael

Department C

Judy

  

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Rita Ngan Subject: <Reminder> *** ERP (1) Management of customer relationship (2) Management of Quotation - August 18, 2020 Please be reminded to attend the course for *** ERP which will be provided by Company A on August 18, 2020 at 09:00 in the Conference Room . The designated colleagues are: Department A Carol Department B Michael Department C Judy This is not a professional reminder email in terms of language, tone and style. You had already established the nature of the email in the last one with time and place.

  • Rita Ngan Subject: <Reminder> *** ERP (1) Management of customer relationship (2) Management of Quotation - August 18, 2020 Please be reminded to attend the course for *** ERP which will be provided by Company A on August 18, 2020 at 09:00 in the Conference Room .
  • The designated colleagues are: Department A Carol Department B Michael Department C Judy This is not a professional reminder email in terms of language, tone and style.
  • You had already established the nature of the email in the last one with time and place.
  • So there is no need to repeat, nor calling out the name of the individuals.
  • Department managers should know.
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Rita Ngan

Subject: <Reminder> *** ERP (1) Management of customer relationship (2) Management of Quotation - August 18, 2020

Please be reminded to attend the course for *** ERP which will be provided by Company A on August 18, 2020 at 09:00 in the Conference Room.

The designated colleagues are:

Department A

Carol

Depar

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