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Rita Ngan Posted 6 years ago
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Dear all,

Tom of company A has scheduled a training plan to the key users starting on August 18th (Tue) in the morning.

According to this schedule, I have booked the dates including August 18th, 19th, 20th, 25th, 26th& 27th during 09:00 – 12:00 at our 9/F Conference Room for you to attend the training.

For details, please refer to the attached training plan.

Andy of IT is reminded to attend all modules of those training.

  

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I rewrite this email: Dear all, Tom of company A has scheduled a training plan for department heads and the key users starting on August 18 th (Tue) from 09:00-12:00. I reserved the 9 /F Conference Room on August 18 th , 19 th , 20 th , 25 th , 26 th and 27 th for this training. For details, please refer to the attached training plan.

— Rita Ngan

  • I rewrite this email: Dear all, Tom of company A has scheduled a training plan for department heads and the key users starting on August 18 th (Tue) from 09:00-12:00.
  • I reserved the 9 /F Conference Room on August 18 th , 19 th , 20 th , 25 th , 26 th and 27 th for this training.
  • For details, please refer to the attached training plan.
  • Andy of IT is reminded to attend all modules of those training .
  • Should you have any queries, please contact Mrs Smith at ext.
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I rewrite this email:

Dear all,

Tom of company A has scheduled a training plan for department heads and the key users starting on August 18th (Tue) from 09:00-12:00.

I reserved the 9/F Conference Room on August 18th, 19th, 20th, 25th, 26th and 27th for this training. For details, please refer

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Tom of company A has scheduled a training plan for department heads and the key users starting on August 18th (Tue) from 09:00-12:00.

I reserved the 9/F Conference Room on August 18th, 19th, 20th, 25th, 26th and 27th for this training. For details, please refer to the attached training plan.

Andy

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