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Jigneshbharati Posted 7 years ago
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In my current role as a Medicine Management Pharmacy Technician, I enjoy working with a range of professionals e.g. doctors, nurses, ward support staff, discharge co-ordinators, community pharmacy staff, nursing home staff, patient and their relative/ carers, GPs, staff from other NHS hospitals. Through continuous professional development I keep my knowledge and skills up-to-date to assist and guide me to achieve our Trust’s goals: The best for patient safety, quality and experience.

I have written the above for the position of Pharmacy IT Specialist.

Does the bold part sound natural and grammatically correct?

  

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Jigneshbharati In my current role as a Medicine Management Pharmacy Technician, I enjoy working with a range of professionals , including doctors, nurses, ward support staff, discharge co-ordinators, community pharmacy staff, nursing home staff, patien t s and their relative s/ c arers, GPs, as well as staff from other NHS hospitals. Through continuous professional developmen t, I keep my knowledge and skills u p to d ate to assist and guide enable me to achieve our t rust’s goals: The best for patient safety, quality and experience. I have written the above for the position of Pharmacy IT Specialist.

  • Jigneshbharati In my current role as a Medicine Management Pharmacy Technician, I enjoy working with a range of professionals , including doctors, nurses, ward support staff, discharge co-ordinators, community pharmacy staff, nursing home staff, patien t s and their relative s/ c arers, GPs, as well as staff from other NHS hospitals.
  • Through continuous professional developmen t, I keep my knowledge and skills u p to d ate to assist and guide enable me to achieve our t rust’s goals: The best for patient safety, quality and experience.
  • I have written the above for the position of Pharmacy IT Specialist.
  • Does the bold part sound natura l, and is it grammatically correct?
  • See above.
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Jigneshbharati

In my current role as a Medicine Management Pharmacy Technician, I enjoy working with a range of professionals, including doctors, nurses, ward support staff, discharge co-ordinators, community pharmacy staff, nursing home staff, patient

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