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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Grammar check please :)
Hello! Could you please check the grammar in this sentence (commas, articles, structures etc.)? I do realize that this is rather long sentence and in a perfect world I should divide it in several sentences, but please keep in mind that I must keep this information in one sentence. That's why I would be thankful if you could taka a look at the structures and wordings that I have used and inform me about any mistakes! Thank you a lot!!
However, we recommend you to address the relevant authorities and controlling institutions from which the correspondence of .... is being delivered to your address requesting not to send the correspondence addressed to .... to your address henceforth, as well as to delete the above address from the registers and databases of the aforementioned institutions, where it is registered as the address for place of residence of ....
However, we recommend you to address the relevant authorities and controlling institutions from which the correspondence of .... is being delivered to your address requesting not to send the correspondence addressed to .... to your address henceforth, as well as to delete the above address from the registers and databases of the aforementioned institutions, where it is registered as the address for place of residence of ....
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When posting on the internet, you need to be more careful about using other people's names. You are unnecessarily wordy; learn to edit by deleting extraneous phrasing: However, we recommend that you contact the authorities and institutions from which the correspondence of [name] is being sent, requesting that they do not send you any further such correspondence and delete from their registers and databases your address as the residence of [name].
- When posting on the internet, you need to be more careful about using other people's names.
- You are unnecessarily wordy; learn to edit by deleting extraneous phrasing: However, we recommend that you contact the authorities and institutions from which the correspondence of [name] is being sent, requesting that they do not send you any further such correspondence and delete from their registers and databases your address as the residence of [name].
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When posting on the internet, you need to be more careful about using other people's names.
You are unnecessarily wordy; learn to edit by deleting extraneous phrasing:
However, we recommend that you contact the authorities and institutions from which the correspondence of [name] is being sent, requesting that they do not send you any further such correspondence and delete from thei
You are unnecessarily wordy; learn to edit by deleting extraneous phrasing:
However, we recommend that you contact the authorities and institutions from which the correspondence of [name] is being sent, requesting that they do not send you any further such correspondence and delete from thei
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