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Miyabi Posted 13 years ago
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Grammar check please
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Please help to check grammar:
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“It is great to hear that there is a space for him in October. Definitely, I'll give you a call and talk to you directly about the details on Oct xx. But before that, I would like to ask two more questions here.
First, may I come around at school some time that is convenience for you next week to have a tour to see about the school environment, for instance the place where the school prepare foods for the kids, and the place school provide them to take naps, etc. Second, just in case if my son after changing to the full day classes, and he is really refuse to and feel discomfortable to fit in that long time schooling, may he shift back to his half-day classes?”
Please help to check grammar:
Many Thanks!
“It is great to hear that there is a space for him in October. Definitely, I'll give you a call and talk to you directly about the details on Oct xx. But before that, I would like to ask two more questions here.
First, may I come around at school some time that is convenience for you next week to have a tour to see about the school environment, for instance the place where the school prepare foods for the kids, and the place school provide them to take naps, etc. Second, just in case if my son after changing to the full day classes, and he is really refuse to and feel discomfortable to fit in that long time schooling, may he shift back to his half-day classes?”
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“It is great to hear that there is a space for him in October. Definitely , I'll give you a call and talk to you directly about the details on Oct xx. But before that, I would like to ask two more questions here .
- “It is great to hear that there is a space for him in October.
- Definitely , I'll give you a call and talk to you directly about the details on Oct xx.
- But before that, I would like to ask two more questions here .
- First, may I come around at school some time that is convenien t for you next week to have a tour to see about the school 's environment ?
- I would like to see , for instance the kitchen place where the school you prepare food for the kids, where they eat, and the place school provide them to take nap room s, etc.
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“It is great to hear that there is a space for him in October. Definitely, I'll give you a call and talk to you directly about the details on Oct xx. But before that, I would like to ask two more questions here.
First, may I comearound at school some time that is convenient for you next week to have a tour to see about
First, may I come
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