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Miyabi Posted 13 years ago
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Grammar check please

Hi, everybody!

Please help to correct:

“Miss White, there is one thing I'd like to let you know. My daughter got double diaper back from school next Friday. Besides, her panty was not properly worn. The back side was wrongly worn on the front. Would you and tell other staffs at school who responsible for this to aware about that and take better care after. Thank you”

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“Miss White, I would like to bring to your knowledge that my daughter got double diaper back from school last Friday. Besides, her pantie was not properly worn; the rear end was front . I would like to request you and all the staff to take better care of my child hereafter .

— Vsuresh

  • “Miss White, I would like to bring to your knowledge that my daughter got double diaper back from school last Friday.
  • Besides, her pantie was not properly worn; the rear end was front .
  • I would like to request you and all the staff to take better care of my child hereafter .
  • Thank you
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“Miss White, I would like to bring to your knowledge that my daughter got double diaper back from school last Friday. Besides, her pantie was not properly worn; the rear end was front. I would like to request you and all the staff to take better care of my child hereafter . Thank you
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vsureshI would like to bring to your knowledge
This is not good English.
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“Miss White, I have a complaint about the way my daughter is being cared for. Last Friday, she was not properly diapered, and her panties were put on backwards. Would you tell the staff responsible for her to take better care when dressing and changing her. Thank you”
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Thank you AlpheccaStars.
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