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Miyabi Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Grammar check please
Hi, everybody
Pls help with grammar:
1.“Pls note that you have mixed up my son's bowl with his classmate. Please change it back.”
2. “I hope my conversation with you yesterday on phone would be a positive and constructive comment for you. I look forward to seeing your improvement and hope you will be my son's good class teacher. My son will enjoy his school life here with your guide.”
Thank you!
Pls help with grammar:
1.“Pls note that you have mixed up my son's bowl with his classmate. Please change it back.”
2. “I hope my conversation with you yesterday on phone would be a positive and constructive comment for you. I look forward to seeing your improvement and hope you will be my son's good class teacher. My son will enjoy his school life here with your guide.”
Thank you!
Top answer
Please spell 'please' properly.
- Please spell 'please' properly.
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Hi Mister Micawber,
Besides the spelling of “please”, the rest is correct?
thank you!
Besides the spelling of “please”, the rest is correct?
thank you!
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miyabiBesides the spelling of “please”, the rest is correct?Please post your revised text and I'll check it for you. Be sure to read it carefully yourself first, too, and you may discover other errors yourself.
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Hi, Mister Micawber
Here is the resvised text and in the same time, I added in more content. Please help to check my grammar. Thank you very much.
1. “Please note that you have mixed up my son's bowl with his classmate. Please help to change it back.”
2. “I appreciate that you gave me a call this afternoon. That is a good start to show your responsibility and initi
Here is the resvised text and in the same time, I added in more content. Please help to check my grammar. Thank you very much.
1. “Please note that you have mixed up my son's bowl with his classmate. Please help to change it back.”
2. “I appreciate that you gave me a call this afternoon. That is a good start to show your responsibility and initi
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Overall, your comments were rather too rude.
Please note that you have confused my son's bowl with one of his classmates'. Please help him retrieve it.
Thank you for your call this afternoon. I hope our conversations will be positive and constructive in the future, and that my son and the other students in your
Please note that you have confused my son's bowl with one of his classmates'. Please help him retrieve it.
Thank you for your call this afternoon. I hope our conversations will be positive and constructive in the future, and that my son and the other students in your
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