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Miyabi Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Grammar check please
Hi everybody,
I wrote a little msg to my friend telling him about my recent life. Pls check and correct my grammar. Thanks in advance!
"Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes! Here, I wish you all the best and happy always. Last month, I was just so overwhelmed. Grandpa has got into the hospital for a month and badly news, he has been approved to have cancer. Now, his condition is getting stable, and doctor has consented him to stay back home. I hope mircale would happen to him and won't feel too much pain. Well, no worries about us. As always, I believe love bears everything!"
I wrote a little msg to my friend telling him about my recent life. Pls check and correct my grammar. Thanks in advance!
"Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes! Here, I wish you all the best and happy always. Last month, I was just so overwhelmed. Grandpa has got into the hospital for a month and badly news, he has been approved to have cancer. Now, his condition is getting stable, and doctor has consented him to stay back home. I hope mircale would happen to him and won't feel too much pain. Well, no worries about us. As always, I believe love bears everything!"
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I have underlined some problem areas, Miyabi. Please try to fix them and post your efforts. Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes!
- I have underlined some problem areas, Miyabi.
- Please try to fix them and post your efforts.
- Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes!
- I wish you all the best and happy always.
- Last month, I was just so overwhelmed.
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I have underlined some problem areas, Miyabi. Please try to fix them and post your efforts.
Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes! I wish you all the best and happy always. Last month, I was just so overwhelmed. Grandpa has got into the hospital for a month and badly news, he has been approved to have cancer. Now, his condition is getti
Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes! I wish you all the best and happy always. Last month, I was just so overwhelmed. Grandpa has got into the hospital for a month and badly news, he has been approved to have cancer. Now, his condition is getti
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Thank you Mister Micawber, pleases check my correction below:
1. be happy
2. got
3. ??? Pls help
4. and the doctor
5. has consented to let him go back home
6. I hope miracle will happen to him and he does not have too much pain.
Aside from these underlined problems, I know I've problem in writing structure and style in Eng. Pl
1. be happy
2. got
3. ??? Pls help
4. and the doctor
5. has consented to let him go back home
6. I hope miracle will happen to him and he does not have too much pain.
Aside from these underlined problems, I know I've problem in writing structure and style in Eng. Pl
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Good morning, miyabi.
Please put your corrections into the text and post a new version. It is very difficult to determine whether you are accurate without doing that.
MM
Please put your corrections into the text and post a new version. It is very difficult to determine whether you are accurate without doing that.
MM
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Mister Micawber, please check and let me know my mistakes. Thank you~
Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes! I wish you all the best and be happy always. Last month, I was just so overwhelmed. Grandpa got into the hospital for a month and there was a bad news that he was approved to have cancer. Now, his condition is getting stable. His doctor has consented to let him sta
Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes! I wish you all the best and be happy always. Last month, I was just so overwhelmed. Grandpa got into the hospital for a month and there was a bad news that he was approved to have cancer. Now, his condition is getting stable. His doctor has consented to let him sta
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Sorry for the very belated birthday wishes! I wish you all the best and happiness always. Last month, I was just so overwhelmed. Grandpa went into hospital for a month and there was bad news that he was diagnosed with cancer. Now his condition is stabilizing. His doctor has let him stay at home. I do hope a miracle will happen and tha
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Mister Micawber,
Thank you very much! I learned a lot from you. I've a question, the last sentence "no other worries" is the same as "no worries"? or they have the difference meaning? Can you explain to me?
Thank you very much! I learned a lot from you. I've a question, the last sentence "no other worries" is the same as "no worries"? or they have the difference meaning? Can you explain to me?
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I added 'other' because you obviously have one worry-- your grandfather. That is the difference. 'No worries' means none at all.
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