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Miyabi Posted 16 years ago
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Grammar Check Please:

"They are all good precautions. Here, I've two more suggestions. First, more security video recordings is needed. Is the existing system can cover the whole area of the villa? Particularly the border part? Second, I found that brighteness is one of the questions. Don't you think that our villa is relatively dark at night. Is it possible to install more public lighting inside our villa, as well as some spotlight at the border of the villa?"

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They are all good precautions. Here, I've two more suggestions. First, more security video cameras are needed.

  • They are all good precautions.
  • Here, I've two more suggestions.
  • First, more security video cameras are needed.
  • Can the existing system cover the whole area of the villa, particularly the boundaries ?
  • Second, I found that darkness is one of the problems .
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They are all good precautions. Here, I've two more suggestions. First, more security video cameras are needed. Can the existing system cover the whole area of the villa, particularly the boundaries? Second, I found that darkness is one of the problems. Don't you think that our villa is relatively dark at night? Is it possible to install more p

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