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Miyabi Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Grammar check please!
Grammar check please:
"I know that there was a robbery happened recently at our villa. I do hope the management office would do even better on the security part because it is particular a serious problem that would directly theatern people's lives and property. I would like to know what has been done in your department to enforce the security proctection at our villa?"
THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
"I know that there was a robbery happened recently at our villa. I do hope the management office would do even better on the security part because it is particular a serious problem that would directly theatern people's lives and property. I would like to know what has been done in your department to enforce the security proctection at our villa?"
THANK YOU VERY MUCH!
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"I know there was a recent robbery at our villa. I hope the villa management would do better in security because this incident is particularly a serious problem that can threaten people and cause property loss. " Chris
- "I know there was a recent robbery at our villa.
- I hope the villa management would do better in security because this incident is particularly a serious problem that can threaten people and cause property loss.
- " Chris
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"I know there was a recent robbery at our villa. I hope the villa management would do better in security because this incident is particularly a serious problem that can threaten people and cause property loss. Now, I would like to know what is your department doing to enforce the security at our villa?"
Chris
Chris
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If this is in fact a real letter of inquiry, I would suggest:
miyabiI understand that there has been a robbery which happened recently at our villa. I do hope the management is taking this matter seriously and has taken immediate action to heighten the security on the property as residents / people are feeling concerned about their lives and properties being at risks. I
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