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Miyabi Posted 16 years ago
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Grammar check please
Grammar check please:
"Quite clearly, this is not the proper serving attitude of your staffs. They should do better than that. I should appreciate your looking into the matter and would like to see the improvement of your staffs working in our villa in the very near future."
---> is it correct to say, "serving attitude of your staffs"? I don't know is "serving" the right word? and the preposition "of" is correct using in this sentence?
---> And how about my last sentence? It's very long. Is it okay? and my meaning is clear?
Thank you!
"Quite clearly, this is not the proper serving attitude of your staffs. They should do better than that. I should appreciate your looking into the matter and would like to see the improvement of your staffs working in our villa in the very near future."
---> is it correct to say, "serving attitude of your staffs"? I don't know is "serving" the right word? and the preposition "of" is correct using in this sentence?
---> And how about my last sentence? It's very long. Is it okay? and my meaning is clear?
Thank you!
Top answer
Use this: Quite clearly, this is not the proper staff attitude; they should do better than that. Please look into the matter . We would like to see a significant improvement in your staff's service at our villa in the very near future.
- Use this: Quite clearly, this is not the proper staff attitude; they should do better than that.
- Please look into the matter .
- We would like to see a significant improvement in your staff's service at our villa in the very near future.
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Use this:
Quite clearly, this is not the proper staff attitude; they should do better than that. Please look into the matter. We would like to see a significant improvement in your staff's service at our villa in the very near future.
Quite clearly, this is not the proper staff attitude; they should do better than that. Please look into the matter. We would like to see a significant improvement in your staff's service at our villa in the very near future.
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