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Miyabi Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Grammar check please
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"Thanks for your kind invitation. We would very much love to come to your wedding party, but I think we might not be able to because Barry planned to have a business trip to go some time in July or August. So here, we send our very best wishes to you and Charles in advance. Our best wishes to the two of you for a happy marriage filled with all the good things.
By the way, may I have your new home address? If possible, don't forget to send me some of your wedding photos."
Thank you~
"Thanks for your kind invitation. We would very much love to come to your wedding party, but I think we might not be able to because Barry planned to have a business trip to go some time in July or August. So here, we send our very best wishes to you and Charles in advance. Our best wishes to the two of you for a happy marriage filled with all the good things.
By the way, may I have your new home address? If possible, don't forget to send me some of your wedding photos."
Thank you~
Top answer
I would make several changes, not for grammar, but for awkwardness. I took the liberty of rewriting your note. Feel free to disregard it if it doesn't work for you.
- I would make several changes, not for grammar, but for awkwardness.
- I took the liberty of rewriting your note.
- Feel free to disregard it if it doesn't work for you.
- "Thank you for your kind invitation.
- We would very much love to come to your wedding party, but we might not be able to because of a business trip that Barry has scheduled.
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I would make several changes, not for grammar, but for awkwardness. I took the liberty of rewriting your note. Feel free to disregard it if it doesn't work for you.
"Thank you for your kind invitation. We would very much love to come to your wedding party, but we might not be able to because of a business trip that Barry has scheduled. However, we certai
"Thank you for your kind invitation. We would very much love to come to your wedding party, but we might not be able to because of a business trip that Barry has scheduled. However, we certai
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Hi Doctor D, thanks for your rewriting. It sounds much more natural and smooth now. I've learned a lot from you. Thank you for pointing out my problem.
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