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Brybry Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Grammar check please

anybody there that could hepl me check if the following is a correct sentence....

I've known that your office is open to receive applicants for Accounting/Office Clerk so that it prompted me to send this résumé.

tnx...
  

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Welcome to the Forums, brybry! I've known that your office is open to receive applicants for Accounting/Office Clerk so that it prompted me to send this résumé. The problem is "so that it".

  • Welcome to the Forums, brybry!
  • I've known that your office is open to receive applicants for Accounting/Office Clerk so that it prompted me to send this résumé.
  • The problem is "so that it".
  • One way to fix it is this: I've known that your office is open to receive applicants for Accounting/Office Clerk .
  • That prompted me to send this résumé.
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Welcome to the Forums, brybry!

I've known that your office is open to receive applicants for Accounting/Office Clerk so that it prompted me to send this résumé.

The problem is "so that it".

One way to fix it is this:
I've known that your office is open to receive applicants for Accounting/Office Clerk. That prompted me to send this résumé.
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Hi,

I've known that your office is open to receive applicants for Accounting/Office Clerk so that it prompted me to send this résumé.

Here are a few more comments, in addition to those already offered to you.

'I've known' is an unsuitable tense and verb. You could say 'I have learned ' or 'I know'.

' . . . your office is open to receive . . . ' ma

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