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Terr3 Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

Grammar check please

0 'When a new monster is created, a new hero introduced'.[br]02br
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00I'm struggling between 'hero introduced' or 'hero is introduced', please state why as well.02br
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00And how is it different if "When a new monster created, a new hero is introduced"?02br
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00TY in advance 0-
  

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02b 02br 02br 00>When a new 01font 00monster created02font 02br 02br 00 Bad English. 02br 02br 00 Don't invent things. Read the good literature and apply the patterns there.

— Marius Hancu

  • 02b 02br 02br 00>When a new 01font 00monster created02font 02br 02br 00 Bad English.
  • 02br 02br 00 Don't invent things.
  • Read the good literature and apply the patterns there.
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0 You need parallelism between the constructions, thus 01b00is.02b02br
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00>When a new 01font00monster created02font02br
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00 Bad English. It's like the monster created something ...02br
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00 Don't invent things. Read the good literature and apply the patterns the
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0 Thank you for the reply! It was on purpose to do it without parallelism, although I couldn't see w/out the 'is' ppl might take the meaning differently. i would be more appreciative if anyone can point out more specificly how should the statement be constructed... 02br
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00-When a new monster is created, a new hero introduce(s?)02br
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00-When a new
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0The first is simply ungrammatical, unless you want to say that the new hero introduces something else.02br
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01i00When a new monster is created, a new hero introduces a new weapon with which to slay it.02i02br
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00If you simply want to say a new hero is introduced into the scene, you MUST have the 01i00is02i00.
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0Ty so much Grammar Geek, that's what I need to know. 050010id1
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