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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Grammar Check for Wedding Stuff
My fiancée and I are trying to finalize a couple of things for our wedding and I want to make sure they are grammatically correct before I send them to the printer. Any help would be greatly appreciated.
We are changing rooms for dessert and wanted to put a notation on the bottom of the menu, we have 2 ideas:
The celebration continues in the Marble Hall for dancing and dessert.
Celebrate with us in the Marble Hall for dancing and dessert.
Also the letter of thanks that we are putting on the program was a struggle for us. Here is what we have, any thoughts?
To our families and friends
We want to thank you for being here with us today. It means the world to us to have all of you together to celebrate our marriage. We are so grateful for the love, support, and friendship you have shown us throughout the years.
We would especially like to thank our parents who have shown us throughout our lives that a marriage is built on respect, trust, laughter and unconditional love. Thank you for your unending generosity and for all your efforts in planning this joyous day.
We are changing rooms for dessert and wanted to put a notation on the bottom of the menu, we have 2 ideas:
The celebration continues in the Marble Hall for dancing and dessert.
Celebrate with us in the Marble Hall for dancing and dessert.
Also the letter of thanks that we are putting on the program was a struggle for us. Here is what we have, any thoughts?
To our families and friends
We want to thank you for being here with us today. It means the world to us to have all of you together to celebrate our marriage. We are so grateful for the love, support, and friendship you have shown us throughout the years.
We would especially like to thank our parents who have shown us throughout our lives that a marriage is built on respect, trust, laughter and unconditional love. Thank you for your unending generosity and for all your efforts in planning this joyous day.
Top answer
Can you combine them? The celebration continues in the Marble Hall. Join us there for dancing and dessert.
- Can you combine them?
- The celebration continues in the Marble Hall.
- Join us there for dancing and dessert.
- What you have is fine but I'd change your phrasing to with instead of for.
- I think your note is very nice.
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Can you combine them?
The celebration continues in the Marble Hall. Join us there for dancing and dessert.
What you have is fine but I'd change your phrasing to with instead of for.
I think your note is very nice. Put a comma after "parents."
Best wishes to you both.
The celebration continues in the Marble Hall. Join us there for dancing and dessert.
What you have is fine but I'd change your phrasing to with instead of for.
I think your note is very nice. Put a comma after "parents."
Best wishes to you both.
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