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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Grammar check for sentence in thank you note

Is this grammatically correct:

It was a great experience discovering planning at the Department of Corrections.

Or do I need something like?

It was a great experience to discover planning at the Department of Corrections.

I think the first sentence is fine?

Or maybe:

It was great to discover planning at the Department of Corrections.

Thank you!
  

Top answer

Anonymous It was a great experience to discover planning at the Department of Corrections. That is a better choice. Anonymous I think the first sentence is fine?

— Mister Micawber

  • Anonymous It was a great experience to discover planning at the Department of Corrections.
  • That is a better choice.
  • Anonymous I think the first sentence is fine?
  • It is a little confusing with the two '-ing' words.
  • Anonymous Or maybe:It was great to discover planning at the Department of Corrections.
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AnonymousIt was a great experience to discover planning at the Department of Corrections.
That is a better choice.
AnonymousI think the first sentence is fine?
It is a little confusing with the two '-ing' words.
AnonymousOr maybe:It was great to discover planning at the Department of Corrections.
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AnonymousIt was a great experience to discover planning at the Department of Corrections.
AnonymousIt was great to discover planning at the Department of Corrections.
There is nothing wrong with the sentences, but they can be interpreted as a rather subtle insult to the department.

You were pleasantly surprised th
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