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Yadoo86 Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Grammar Check for my small report

I have a small report task. I will be appreciated if anyone checks my grammar. I will be grateful for any other assistance.

Introduction:
There are many cities you can visit during a weekend break. The objective of this report is to compare three tourist cities - Reykjavik, Riga and Tallin .

Facts:
- Reykjavik is the most expensive city among the mentioned cities. Whereas, Riga is the cheapest one.
- Tallin is the best city that you can do a number of impressive activities such as visiting wide rang of ancient places and eating at excellent restaurants.
- The quality of accommodations in Reykjavik is better than the other cities.
- In Reykjavik, you can get better nightlife than the given cities.

Conclusion:
The report shows the pros and cons between the three European cities by taking different factors such as cost, amenities and accommodations’ quality.

Recommendations:
- If you are looking for the best nightlife in Europe, you will probably need to visit Reykjavik.
- In Tallin, you can find many palaces, temples, statues, castles and cathedrals; If you are interesting in a land with a rich and varied history, you might visit Tallin.
- If you are looking for supremely comfortable accommodations, you could probably visit Riga.

Thanks in advance.
  

Top answer

I would make the following corrections- Introduction: There are many cities you can visit during a weekend's break. In this report, three cities frequented by tourists are compared- Reykjavik, Rig and Tallin. Facts: - Reykjavik is the most expensive city amongst the mentioned cities, whereas, Riga is the cheapest one.

  • I would make the following corrections- Introduction: There are many cities you can visit during a weekend's break.
  • In this report, three cities frequented by tourists are compared- Reykjavik, Rig and Tallin.
  • Facts: - Reykjavik is the most expensive city amongst the mentioned cities, whereas, Riga is the cheapest one.
  • - Tallin has the most attractions for tourists, including ancient relics and world reknowned restaurants.
  • - The quality of accommodations in Reykjavik is better than those in the other cities.
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I would make the following corrections-

Introduction:
There are many cities you can visit during a weekend's break. In this report, three cities frequented by tourists are compared- Reykjavik, Rig and Tallin.

Facts:
- Reykjavik is the most expensive city amongst the mentioned cities, whereas, Riga is the cheapest one.
- Tallin has the most attractions for tourists,
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