grammar check by english speaker

Grammar check please

1/ For me to feel it, it must mean it's really present. - If I feel it, it must mean it's really present.

2/ I didn't know what time was best to take pictures this time a year.

3/ I don't love him like I would my own child.

4/ I can't come to ask my parents for money. - I can't seem to ask my parents for money.

5/ I'm still waiting for the day I will be able to use this.

6/ She seems to imitate everyone the same way. It seems she thinks everyone has an Italian accent.

7/ We no longer make recommendation for photographers as people have come back with horror stories. (we no longer recommend photographers)

8/ I've cost my insurance company in medical bills a lot more than what I've paid them annually.

thanks in advance