0
Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Grammar check, any changes?

Then I started to stumble on a question on my own thoughts. If the educational system has an ambition to teach students logical and critical thinking with geometry then why don't they have the core curriculum to contain Aristotle on narrative?

I'm not sure if the last part is good.
  

Top answer

I'm not sure I follow you. Then I stumbled upon a question in my own thoughts: If the educational system has an ambition to teach students logical and critical thinking with geometry, then why don't they have the core curriculum contain Aristotle on narrative ? What do you mean by "on narrative"?

— Enoon

  • I'm not sure I follow you.
  • Then I stumbled upon a question in my own thoughts: If the educational system has an ambition to teach students logical and critical thinking with geometry, then why don't they have the core curriculum contain Aristotle on narrative ?
  • What do you mean by "on narrative"?
  • I'm sure I'm being thick.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

4 Answers
0
I'm not sure I follow you.

Then I stumbled upon a question in my own thoughts: If the educational system has an ambition to teach students logical and critical thinking with geometry, then why don't they have the core curriculum contain Aristotle on narrative?

What do you mean by "on narrative"? I'm sure I'm being thick.
0
0
well, fine let's say exclude that.
would it still be correct??
0
0
You mean after I'd corrected it? Yes, but it could be improved. I try to change as little as possible, but with a freer hand, I'd make it:

Then I stumbled upon a question in my own thoughts: If the educational system has an ambition to teach students logical and critical thinking with geometry, then why don't they include Aristotle in the core curriculum?
0

Related Questions