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Wonder123 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Grammar check - Although

Please check the below sentences and advice.

A kid came to my shop to buy a comical book. Although(even though or though) I have a handful of experience in guiding the  kids, who come to our shop to buy comical book, to choose the right book; choosing the book for that kid had been a toughest challenge because the kid has almost all the comical books that I have in my shop for sale.

If there are any errors is the above paragraph please rectify them and help to write the paragraph precisely.

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Please someone respond to my request
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Wonder123Please check the below sentences and advice.A kid came to my shop to buy a comical book. Although(even though or though) I have a handful of experience in guiding the kids, who come to our shop to buy comical book, to choose the right book; choosing the book for that kid had been a toughest challenge because the kid has almost all the comical books that I have i
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BarbaraPAPlease note: comic book.
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BarbaraPAA kid came to my shop to buy a comic book. Although I have a lot of experience in helping the kids who come to my shop choose a comic they will like, this was a tough challenge because he already had almost all the comics that I have for sale.
What does this part of the se
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You used it in your original.

It was very hard to do it.
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Can I replace with those words in the edited version of the sentence?
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You will have to show me what you mean. I edited everything. Which words do you want to replace?
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A kid came to my shop to buy a comic book. Although I have a lot of experience in helping the kids who come to my shop choose a comic they will like, choosing the best comic for him was a tough challenge because he already had almost all the comics that I have for sale.
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Ok can you please help me to understand the difference between the following two sentences?

A kid came to my shop to buy a comic book. Although I have a lot of experience in helping the kids who come to my shop choose a comic they will like, choosing the best comic for him was a tough challenge because he already h
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The past perfect is not needed.
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