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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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Hi teachers! I need your help

Speaking with full of honesty, I seriously cannot motivate myself whenever I'm feeling down. There are times when I wish I could walk happily with my head nodding about left to right, but I just can't. No matter how hard I try, I can't seem to stop thinking about the horrific changes that have occured in my life which would just knock me down again thereafter./data/user/0/com.samsung.android.app.notes/files/share/clipdata_190304_201635_431.sdoc->

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Here are some edits. Compare this to your version. Speaking honestly,, I really cannot motivate myself whenever I'm feeling down.

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  • No matter how hard I try, I can't seem to stop thinking about the horrific changes that have occurred in my life, which would just knock me down.
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Here are some edits. Compare this to your version.

Speaking honestly,, I really cannot motivate myself whenever I'm feeling down. There are times when I wish I could walk happily with my head nodding about left to right, but I just can't. No matter how hard I try, I can't seem to stop thinking about the horrific changes that have occurred in my life, which would just knock me

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Speaking honestly, I cannot motivate myself when I am feeling down. There are times when wish I could walk happily, without shaking my head as I remember bad things, but I just can't. No matter how hard I try ...

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