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Johnie Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Grammar check

Can anyone help rephrase or identify the errors in the sentence below?


Being a profession, as opposed to an occupation, the practice of engineering is strictly regulated by regulating bodies who work to ensure that the members of the profession fulfill their duties as engineers.

  

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regulated by regulating bodies You need to avoid this kind of repetition. Iit's not natural, and even sounds a bit silly.

  • regulated by regulating bodies You need to avoid this kind of repetition.
  • Iit's not natural, and even sounds a bit silly.
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regulated by regulating bodies You need to avoid this kind of repetition. Iit's not natural, and even sounds a bit silly.

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