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Frazpk Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Grammar check

Hi Guys,

is this sentence grammatically correct?

The performance of the laptop will be monitored by the administration in the upcoming test, to check, if the requested changes fix the speed of that laptop.


Thanks

Faraz Amjad

  

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The performance of the laptop will be monitored by the administration in the upcoming test; it will be checked if the requested changes will fix the defects related to its speed.

  • The performance of the laptop will be monitored by the administration in the upcoming test; it will be checked if the requested changes will fix the defects related to its speed.
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The performance of the laptop will be monitored by the administration in the upcoming test; it will be checked if the requested changes will fix the defects related to its speed.

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