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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

grammar check

Can you please check the grammar of below sentence?

"I apologies for the confusion. Even though the employees travel to other states do not generate any revenue, this activity may further the business' interests in the state. Thus, can you please populate this section?"
  

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"I apolog i ze for the confusion. Even though the employee s ' travel to other states do not generate any revenue, this activity may further the business' interests in the state. "

  • "I apolog i ze for the confusion.
  • Even though the employee s ' travel to other states do not generate any revenue, this activity may further the business' interests in the state.
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"I apologize for the confusion. Even though the employees' travel to other states do not generate any revenue, this activity may further the business' interests in the state. Thus, can you please fill in populate this section?"
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Anonymous"I apologies
Should be apologise or apologize.
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business interests
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business's interests
OR
businesses' interests

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