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Aoymee2 Posted 12 years ago
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From our understanding of postmodernism which can be defined by combing or altering elements of the past and the present and reproduce it to something new, is an idea that we believe is evident in Issey Miyake’s design practice, where he invented and incorporated innovative textile technologies along with his admiration for traditional Japanese art as well as the forms.
thank you.
From our understanding of postmodernism which can be defined by combing or altering elements of the past and the present and reproduce it to something new, is an idea that we believe is evident in Issey Miyake’s design practice, where he invented and incorporated innovative textile technologies along with his admiration for traditional Japanese art as well as the forms.
thank you.
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S orry, I don't understand your meaning. I can't find the main clause in this. eg What is the main subject?
- S orry, I don't understand your meaning.
- I can't find the main clause in this.
- eg What is the main subject?
- What is the main verb?
- You are trying to cram too much into a single long sentence.
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Sorry, I don't understand your meaning.
I can't find the main clause in this. eg What is the main subject? What is the main verb?
You are trying to cram too much into a single long sentence. I suggest you rewrite it as two or more shorter sentences.
I can't find the main clause in this. eg What is the main subject? What is the main verb?
You are trying to cram too much into a single long sentence. I suggest you rewrite it as two or more shorter sentences.
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Thank you for reading through this
For the last sentence does this sound better?
where he incorporates technology with traditional Japanese art as well as the forms.
For the last sentence does this sound better?
where he incorporates technology with traditional Japanese art as well as the forms.
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For the last sentence does this sound better?
I don't know what you mean by 'the last sentence'. You only have one long sentence.
If you just mean you want to change the last part of your long sentence, you need to reword your suggestion slightly,
eg where he incorporates technolog
I don't know what you mean by 'the last sentence'. You only have one long sentence.
If you just mean you want to change the last part of your long sentence, you need to reword your suggestion slightly,
eg where he incorporates technolog
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