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Alan Lim Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

grammar check

Can anyone help to check if there is any grammar mistake in the following sentence? I design this research with a respondent validation process and narrower level of data collection. By choosing deductive way of relating concepts with data, I am generalizing the findings from a single-case study with the help of a research protocol as mental framework.
  

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It doesn't read quite correctly, but I don't know what you're trying to say in order to correct it. My best guess would be: I designed this research with a respondent validation process and a narrower level of data collection. By choosing a deductive way of relating concepts with data, I am able to generalize the findings from a single-case study with the help of a research protocol as a mental framework.

  • It doesn't read quite correctly, but I don't know what you're trying to say in order to correct it.
  • My best guess would be: I designed this research with a respondent validation process and a narrower level of data collection.
  • By choosing a deductive way of relating concepts with data, I am able to generalize the findings from a single-case study with the help of a research protocol as a mental framework.
  • But I don't know whether things like "respondent validation process", "single-case study" or "mental framework" make sense in the context you're going to be using.
  • I also don't know whether you want to say "relating concepts with data" or "relating concepts to data".
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It doesn't read quite correctly, but I don't know what you're trying to say in order to correct it. My best guess would be:

I designed this research with a respondent validation process and a narrower level of data collection. By choosing a deductive way of relating concepts with data, I am able to generalize the findings from a single-case study with the help of a research protoc
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thanks, for your best guess

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