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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
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Could you tell me whether the following sentence is fine?
Thank you.

All kinds of college entrance exam are aimed at limiting the number of students who can enter college from all students who want to study in college.
  

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Could you tell me whether the following sentence is fine? Thank you. All kinds of college entrance exam are aimed at limiting the number of students who can enter college from all students who want to study in college.

  • Could you tell me whether the following sentence is fine?
  • Thank you.
  • All kinds of college entrance exam are aimed at limiting the number of students who can enter college from all students who want to study in college.
  • It has various problems.
  • Say eg All college entrance exams are aimed at limiting the number of students who can enter.
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Could you tell me whether the following sentence is fine?
Thank you.

All kinds of college entrance exam are aimed at limiting the number of students who can enter college from all students who want to study in college.

It has various problems.
Sa
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Thank you for your comments.
Could you tell me how about the following revised one?
Does it sound more English?

All college entrance exams are aimed at limiting the number of students who can enter by selecting qualified ones from all who want to study in college.
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Hi,

Could you tell me how about the following revised one?
Does it sound more English?

All college entrance exams are aimed at limiting the number of students who can enter, comma by selecting qualified ones from all who want to study in college.

It's co
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College entrance exams are designed to be selective so that only the highest qualified candidates will pass and be admitted.
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lucas21cAll college entrance exams are aimed at limiting the number of students who can enter by selecting qualified ones from all who want to study in college.
lucas21,
This is how I analyze your original sentence. I hope I am correct!

I think the "issues" , as Clive mentioned, maybe the choice of words and your trying to include too much in one
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I really appreciate all of your comments.
Thank all of you for your help!

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