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This is my original writing/ post . Anyone, please check the grammer and the structure of the senctence

What is this life, if I have to struggle until I break my bones, just to fill my own belly. Sometime, It makes me so painful to behold other children of my age, enjoying their vaccation to the fullest, they could. Had I born to a rich parents, I would not have suffered like this. I really wish I was rich. If I were rich, I Would have helped other folk with food, blanket, shelter, money and so on. Why is every body so selfish? Why can't they give something to a needy people, in leu of wasting it.

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AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

This is my original writing/ post . Anyone, please check the grammar and the structure of the sentences.

What is this life, if I have to struggle until I break my bones,(no comma) just to fill my own belly? Sometimes, it makes me so pained (it gives me great pain) to behold other children of my age, enjoying their vaccation to the fullest, because they could. Had I been born to --a-- rich parents, I would not have suffered like this. I really wish I were rich. If I were rich, I would help ~~have helped~~ other folks with food, blankets, shelter, money and so on. ( if I had been rich, I would have helped...) Why is everybody so selfish? Why can't they give something to --a-- needy people, in lieu of wasting it.

Sharklee · Answer

please ccorrect my sentence if any.

Had I been rich, I would have helped others

Thanks

Sharklee · Answer

Thank you for the correction. I really appeciate for the time and the effort you have spent to correct it.

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