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Pblicemail Posted 15 years ago
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whats wrong with this sentence: "I was excited to learn about this internship because it fits with my career passion of designing, building and testing."
Online grammer checker things there is something wrong with this sentence. Of course I trust on computer than myself, because I am a dumn in writting.
Can anybody help me to check my cover letter? I would really appriciate. Thank you.
Online grammer checker things there is something wrong with this sentence. Of course I trust on computer than myself, because I am a dumn in writting.
Can anybody help me to check my cover letter? I would really appriciate. Thank you.
Top answer
It's not very accurate. Grammatically, it is fine. But logically and syntactically, it could be improved.
- It's not very accurate.
- Grammatically, it is fine.
- But logically and syntactically, it could be improved.
- I would say: I am excited about this internship opportunity as it matches my career goal/ the discipline of my study/ my passion in engineering.
- Would this help?
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pblicemail"I was excited to learn about this internship because it fits with my career passion of designing, building and testing."If you used MS word, chances are, we all get red or green underlines at on time or another.It's not very accurate. Grammatically, it is fine. But logically and syntactically, it could be improved. I would say: I am excited about t
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