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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Grammar check

I am trying to determine if this sentence is gramatically correct:

After attending several webinars on Web 2.0, I am familiar with this new technology and interested in how libraries can use social networking applications, such as Facebook, to advertise library events and new books to an increasingly technically oriented population.
  

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The grammar is fine. CJ

  • The grammar is fine.
  • CJ
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The grammar is fine.

CJ
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Hi,

I am trying to determine if this sentence is gramatically correct: Seems acceptable to me, although the word 'webinar' is new to me. I'd add a hyphen after 'technically'.

You might consider breaking it into two parts.

After attending several webinars on Web 2.0, I am familiar with this new technology. I am interested in how libraries can use social networking appli

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