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Nano Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

Grammar check

Hai

Please check the grammer

This indicates the minimum weight fraction of fiber will have to be required to support the network, even though the volume fraction of fiber is high.

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A couple of suggestions:
  • First, my seventh grade English teacher insisted that we never use the word "this" without stating what "this" is. Doing so helps the reader understand more fully what the writer is trying to convey.
  • Second, you can simplify the sentence by eliminating "will have to be".
This X indicates the minimum we
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Hi,

I don't understand the meaning of the phrases minimum weight fraction and volume fraction. Unless these are technical terms that you and your audience are familiar with, I suggest that you say it in another way.

eg something like . . . minimum percentage of the total weight . . . ?
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