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Julie & Ethan Posted 20 years ago
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Bring your co-workers, friends, family and indulge your senses with a relaxing and interesting moment filled with new taste impressions.
According to Aztec legend, Quetzalcoatl, the God of air and light, gave the beverage to the people to express his gratitude to an Aztec princess who preferred death to revealing the hiding place of the God’s treasures.
The name chocolate ” tchocoatl” is believed to come from the two Mayan words ”xoco” – sound and ”atl” – water. It derives from the way the beverage was prepared: the cacao was stirred in warm water.
Mixing: the cacao paste and the other ingredients are mixed together and heated to 50° C. This process brings the cacao mass to the proper temperature; it loses some of its fat and becomes liquid. The purpose is to obtain a homogeneous cacao mass.
Grinding: It is important to reduce the granular particles in the cacao mass to an average particle size of about 15 microns.
Conching: the cacao mass is mixed intensively, at a high temperature of 45° to 75° C, to make it smooth and to get rid of granular particles. The conching process can take up to 72 hours. During this process, it is necessary to add cacao butter in order for the mass to become liquid.
Tempering: the next step is to cool the mass to a temperature that makes the cacao butter crystallise. This is an important step in order to get a smooth and glossy chocolate surface.
Bring your co-workers, friends, family and indulge your senses with a relaxing and interesting moment filled with new taste impressions.
According to Aztec legend, Quetzalcoatl, the God of air and light, gave the beverage to the people to express his gratitude to an Aztec princess who preferred death to revealing the hiding place of the God’s treasures.
The name chocolate ” tchocoatl” is believed to come from the two Mayan words ”xoco” – sound and ”atl” – water. It derives from the way the beverage was prepared: the cacao was stirred in warm water.
Mixing: the cacao paste and the other ingredients are mixed together and heated to 50° C. This process brings the cacao mass to the proper temperature; it loses some of its fat and becomes liquid. The purpose is to obtain a homogeneous cacao mass.
Grinding: It is important to reduce the granular particles in the cacao mass to an average particle size of about 15 microns.
Conching: the cacao mass is mixed intensively, at a high temperature of 45° to 75° C, to make it smooth and to get rid of granular particles. The conching process can take up to 72 hours. During this process, it is necessary to add cacao butter in order for the mass to become liquid.
Tempering: the next step is to cool the mass to a temperature that makes the cacao butter crystallise. This is an important step in order to get a smooth and glossy chocolate surface.
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Hello Julie & Ethan, Which of you posted this? Below is my attempt, which may be incorrect. Changes are marked in this way , the forum's PHPBB doesn't work in my Opera.
- Hello Julie & Ethan, Which of you posted this?
- Below is my attempt, which may be incorrect.
- Changes are marked in this way , the forum's PHPBB doesn't work in my Opera.
- According to an_ Aztec legend, Quetzalcoatl, the _g_od of air and light, gave the beverage to the people to express his gratitude to an Aztec princess who _had preferred death to revealing the hiding place of the _g_od’s treasures.
- It origins from the way the beverage was prepared: the cacao was stirred in warm water.
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Hello Julie & Ethan,
Which of you posted this?
Below is my attempt, which may be incorrect.
Changes are marked in this way, the forum's PHPBB doesn't work in my Opera.
According to an_ Aztec legend, Quetzalcoatl, the _g_od of air and light, gave the beverage to the people to express his gratitude to an Aztec princess who _had preferred death to revealing th
Which of you posted this?
Below is my attempt, which may be incorrect.
Changes are marked in this way, the forum's PHPBB doesn't work in my Opera.
According to an_ Aztec legend, Quetzalcoatl, the _g_od of air and light, gave the beverage to the people to express his gratitude to an Aztec princess who _had preferred death to revealing th
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