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Aastha Posted 22 years ago
Grammar

Grammar Check

Is this sentence gramatically correct?

You can download it from the site. It's a full version but will expire after some time.
If needed, we can also customize the product at some *** extra.
  

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It's darn close if it isn't. The "but will" and "*** extra" didn't seem proper to me. That said, I would write it differently.

  • It's darn close if it isn't.
  • The "but will" and "*** extra" didn't seem proper to me.
  • That said, I would write it differently.
  • You can download it from the site.
  • It's a full version that will expire after some [I'd provide the number of days or trials or whatever] time.
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It's darn close if it isn't. The "but will" and "*** extra" didn't seem proper to me.

That said, I would write it differently.

You can download it from the site. It's a full version that will expire after some [I'd provide the number of days or trials or whatever] time. If needed, we can also customize the product at an additional cost.

The last sentence can be wri
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Thanks Moutainhiker,
You are always there to help
Thanks a lot.
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Aastha,

My pleasure. Just looking over my answer, I might change the "at" to "for."

Original - If needed, we can also customize the product at an additional cost.

Revised - If needed, we can also customize the product for an additional cost.

Original 1) - If needed, we can also customize the product at a nominal cost.

Revised 1) - If needed, w
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Data,

It's an interesting question. I saw two usage notes.


From GuruNet.com...

Let's go through them.

USAGE NOTE The word data is the plural of Latin datum, “something given,” but it is not always treated as a plural noun in English. The plural usage is still common, as this headline from the New York Times attests: “Data Are Elusive on the Homeless
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Mister MicawberConfirmation of attendance at meeting

why dont you guys meet Marianne and me at my house.
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