Assurance is a rare but welcomed feat, especially for me as a college student.
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StartFragment>Assurance is a rare but welcomed feat, especially for a college student.
Im trying to emphasize myself but my choice of words in the first sentence sounds redundant. But the second sentence portrays a sense of assumption on the readers part, assuming they know I'm a college student, regardless of making this fact apparent in my essay. I feel like my head is going to explode, please tell me your suggestions to keep my mind matter intact. Thank you.
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Assurance is a rare but welcome attribute , especially in a college student.
— Mister Micawber
Assurance is a rare but welcome attribute , especially in a college student.
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