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Nhung 312 Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Grammar and vocab correction pls

Here is my academic reference. Could u guys check the grammar and vocabulary for me pls?

"I would like to recommend P..., a Bachelor at University of Labour and Social affairs, for admission to the Master program in your university. I worked with N... in four years as her class head-teacher.


N... had distinguished herself from other sutdents by her intelligence and inventiveness in class. Her unique approach to solving problems impressed me a lot, not to mention the significant contributions she made in class by voicing her opinions. Besides, she always persevered with specialized accounting courses, even though she found them difficult. She was also eager to absorb more knowledge by looking up information and asking her teachers whenever she had a chance.


Her diligence and good performance impressed me once again by her internship report. Focusing on details and statistics, she worte a report mainly about finance and marketing aspects of Ha Noi ... Company, which was the building material provider. The report was greatly developed by her creative yet innovative method of thinking and analyzing, and then she finally got an A for her excellent internship report.


N... also spent time involved in many social activities. She was one of the volunteers, promoting blood donation in her university. Besides, she also attended in Student Union and English Club at university as a crucial member. In my perspective, N... was not only enthusiatic but also dynamic.


I believe that with her abilities and impressive academic records, N... will be an asset to your program.


If I can provide any further information for you, please do not hesitate to contact me"

  

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nhung 312 Bachelor That is an unmarried (single) man. nhung 312 Master program It is usually master's. nhung 312 in your university.

  • nhung 312 Bachelor That is an unmarried (single) man.
  • nhung 312 Master program It is usually master's.
  • nhung 312 in your university.
  • Use the name of the university.
  • Otherwise, "your master's program".
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nhung 312Bachelor

That is an unmarried (single) man.

nhung 312Master program

It is usually master's.

nhung 312in your university.

Use the name of the university.

Otherwise, "your master's program".

nhung 312

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