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Can anyone help me check for some grammatical errors in this. Also, this form of writing is required for me to put into essay format, so if you have any common thesis/intro for me, feel free to bring them up.

1) The theme of the story is about how a nurse can provide palliative care for patients who are suffering from deadly diseases, this provide a trustworthy atmosphere. The process is done by providing mental and physical care to the patient who acquire these ailments which can intervene with the illness and as a result can extend the time of the patient death. The interference is proceeded by the caring side of Nursing that can alter the psychological aspect of the client which may cause mental and physical pain relief to the client. The story “A Good Death” introduces Carolyn Adams as a palliative nurse who works at Royal Victoria Hospital in Montreal. As a Nurse, she provide medication and care to her clients in a concept in which the patient have become accustomed to. She is not only a care giver, but a coordinator who set priorities to the patients by managing their time from family visit to medication. Parts of the aspect of caring she works is bathing, massaging, feeding and even talking to the patients.

2) This theme accommodate the student nurse with ideas of what he/she expect when entering the nursing field. In other words, the Nursing approach is not only towards the technical side, rather it incorporates the caring and coordinating aspect in which the student must understand. In addition, as a student nurse, the theme also teaches the student not only the expectation he/she comprehend towards becoming a nurse, rather, its also about the expectations from the health care system and most importantly from the patients towards the nurse. For example, in the story, Adams says “Bathing and massaging are also intimate that they often get patient talking”. This explain that even though Adams have the nursing education and experience, but she still lacks the fundamentals of dealing with each patient, in other word, every patient is a separated experience from the other, sense each constitute different behavior than another.

3) Professional Experience: “A lot comes out. You learn a lot during bathing time, and the more your learn the better care you can provide”
Ethics: “ A patient may want a bath and a massage for pain relief. Adams will do that herself”
Aesthetics: “ Touch is so important, when they feel my hands, they know I care”
Empirics: “ A regular part of the nurses routine is distributing pain medication on schedule, and monitoring patients who need treatment for breakthrough pain. The only physical pain that remains difficult to control is neuropathic”

4) What Adams understand as a nurse influence her actions in a way that she comprehend the fact that she is in a palliative care facility. As a result, she is precautious with her attitudes, and even actions towards the patient, using her nursing knowledge, she was able to manifest better performance that are based on the theoretical understand of nursing throughout treating the patient. For example, in the story, Adams is always careful with how she give bathing and massaging to the patient or it will change the reaction of some patients towards her. However, throughout her experience she knows how to overcome these obstacle by learning from the patients reaction. The part of learning from experience is essential in the Nursing field, and it is required for the nurses acceptance from the patients.
5) The article “Nurse-patient relationships in palliative care” is a qualitative research data that supports the theme of the story. The research data was collected to manifest the relationship between nurses and patients. It included 10 patients and 10 nurses. The research concluded that “ Major categories are formed as a result that are similar to the theme; Trust worth relationship, and enriched experiences. Trustworthy relationship is a unique aspect that is formed when nurses provide patients with what they need. Similarly, In the story, Adams included that “ Nurses ensure that Patients are able to tell their family members and friends what they want to”. This relationship is also formed when nurses manifest not only caring behavior but caring actions towards the patients. In the story, Adams described the action of hand touching as a way the patient comprehend the caring nurse.() In addition, some of the behavioral aspect of caring in the story show Adams as a nurse who do not rush to leave her job, instead, she set down with the patients and talk to them to ensure them get over a good day.