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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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grammar and spelling correct?
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can you help me with the grammar and spelling? Thank you.
"Outside the school I have several interests and hobbies. For example I am attending the school course "xxxx". xxxx is a software-program for the design, drafting and presentation of 3D-graphics and in that course you learn how to use the program and some basics. Besides, I love soccer and I am playing soccer very often in my freetime with my friends and my brother on soccer pitches. I also played soccer for a club for three years. Furthermore I give to a friend some extra lessons in maths once a week to improve her maths. Additionally I have a sidejob at the company "xx xxx" where I have to relay information in English from a live sporting event to their call center at the weekend. In the Holydays I sometimes also spent with my friends in the "xx forest", it is a large and beautiful forest near Xxxx."
can you help me with the grammar and spelling? Thank you.
"Outside the school I have several interests and hobbies. For example I am attending the school course "xxxx". xxxx is a software-program for the design, drafting and presentation of 3D-graphics and in that course you learn how to use the program and some basics. Besides, I love soccer and I am playing soccer very often in my freetime with my friends and my brother on soccer pitches. I also played soccer for a club for three years. Furthermore I give to a friend some extra lessons in maths once a week to improve her maths. Additionally I have a sidejob at the company "xx xxx" where I have to relay information in English from a live sporting event to their call center at the weekend. In the Holydays I sometimes also spent with my friends in the "xx forest", it is a large and beautiful forest near Xxxx."
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I have several extra-curricular interests. For example, I am attending Xxxx course, a software program for the design, drafting and presentation of 3D graphics and am learning how to use programs and some other basics. I also love soccer and play it often in my free time with my friends and my brother; I played for a club for three years.
- I have several extra-curricular interests.
- For example, I am attending Xxxx course, a software program for the design, drafting and presentation of 3D graphics and am learning how to use programs and some other basics.
- I also love soccer and play it often in my free time with my friends and my brother; I played for a club for three years.
- Furthermore, I give a friend extra lessons in math once a week.
- I also have a part-time weekend job at Xx ***, where I relay information in English from a live sporting event to their call center.
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I have several extra-curricular interests. For example, I am attending Xxxx course, a software program for the design, drafting and presentation of 3D graphics and am learning how to use programs and some other basics. I also love soccer and play it often in my free time with my friends and my brother; I played for a club for three years. Furthermore, I give a friend extra lessons in math once
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