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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Hello, I've recently bought phone screen that doesn't work and is unfit for my phone. I wrote this to the guy who sold it to me:

Hello. I'm writing to you in regards to the screen that I purchased. The product does not work, what you can see on the video I included.
Also, some of the elements differ from those in the original product, what you can see on photos I enclosed. I would like a refund in the amount of screen purchase price, or you to send me the new one.

Now, it is supposed to be a note to the seller, not a letter of complaint. Is it to official or too long?
  

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**** o, I'm writing to you in regards to the screen that I purchased. The product does not work , what as you can see on the video I included with this email . Also, some of the elements differ from those in the original product , what you as can see on photos I enclosed.

— Teechr

  • **** o, I'm writing to you in regards to the screen that I purchased.
  • The product does not work , what as you can see on the video I included with this email .
  • Also, some of the elements differ from those in the original product , what you as can see on photos I enclosed.
  • I would like a refund in to the full amount of the screen purchase price, or a new screen of the same type and model as the original.
  • you to send me the new one.
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****o, I'm writing to you in regards to the screen that I purchased. The product does not work , what as you can see on the video I included with this email.
Also, some of the elements differ from those in the original product , what you as can see on photos I enclosed. I would like a refund in to the full amount of
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