Grammar and sentence structure question
Hello all,
Would you mind helping me with the following sentences please ? I tried my best but they still look very long and confusing to me.
Thanks a lot for your help
- Familiarity with high-tech sector gained through exposure to a wide range product development initiatives in the aerospace industry combined with a strong knowledge of the energy sector developed from involvement in various ground breaking projects in the natural gas industry.
- Able to have an open and direct communication with peers and seasoned in navigating a multicultural environment to achieve results.
- Ensure a flawless financial communication between XXX and the investment community, more specifically with equity research analysts in regards to financial model inputs and assumptions.
Top answer
These are not sentences. Sentences have a subject, verb, and object. I cannot parse these as sentences.
- These are not sentences.
- Sentences have a subject, verb, and object.
- I cannot parse these as sentences.
- If they are just bullet points, the group should have a parallel structure.
- But yours do not.
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These are not sentences. Sentences have a subject, verb, and object. I cannot parse these as sentences.
If they are just bullet points, the group should have a parallel structure. But yours do not.
Many of your word combinations are odd, such as "navigate an environment," "financial communication,"
After I finished reading the text, I am very confused. I try to figure out
0Sorry if I was not clear when I posted.
These are 3 separate bullet points that are not related.
I simply wanted to get help on the structure of each bullet point.
0Bullet points should be brief, and easily and quickly understood.
Yours are not.
0Thanks for stating for the obvious captain.
That's why I came here for help and you gave me a lot.
You're the best.
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