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FredrikKaspersen Posted 11 years ago
Grammar
Grammar and Sentence Structure
I have an assignment to describe a picture, and I'm working on the first paragraph. I've used quite many synonyms, so I'd appreciate if you could point out any grammatical errors or awkward words in the sentences below. Thanks a lot!
In the middle of an obscure lodgement, a dormant elder lies. His torso covers a walnut-wooden writing desk. Head resting against his radial bone, with pieces of paper laying abroach. His gold and purple patterned garments resembles the 18th centuries coats and breeches that was donned by the wealthy.
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In the middle of an obscure lodgement, a dormant elder lies. His torso covers a walnut-wooden writing desk, his head rests against his radial bone, and pieces of paper lies abroach. His gold and purple patterned garments resembles the 18th centuries coats and breeches, that was donned by the wealthy people.
In the middle of an obscure lodgement, a dormant elder lies. His torso covers a walnut-wooden writing desk. Head resting against his radial bone, with pieces of paper laying abroach. His gold and purple patterned garments resembles the 18th centuries coats and breeches that was donned by the wealthy.
Edit: Small changes.
In the middle of an obscure lodgement, a dormant elder lies. His torso covers a walnut-wooden writing desk, his head rests against his radial bone, and pieces of paper lies abroach. His gold and purple patterned garments resembles the 18th centuries coats and breeches, that was donned by the wealthy people.
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) In the middle of a room of an isolated hunting lodge there's a dead man, an elderly man. Most of his torso covers a walnut writing desk. He's lying face down with his head resting on a forearm.
- ) In the middle of a room of an isolated hunting lodge there's a dead man, an elderly man.
- Most of his torso covers a walnut writing desk.
- He's lying face down with his head resting on a forearm.
- Papers from the desk are scattered about.
- His clothes are very unusual.
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(The following is US usage.)
In the middle of a room of an isolated hunting lodge there's a dead man, an elderly man. Most of his torso covers a walnut writing desk. He's lying face down with his head resting on a forearm. Papers from the desk are scattered about. His clothes are very unusual. He's dressed in a purple velvet coat and breeches that are covered with gold embroidery. T
In the middle of a room of an isolated hunting lodge there's a dead man, an elderly man. Most of his torso covers a walnut writing desk. He's lying face down with his head resting on a forearm. Papers from the desk are scattered about. His clothes are very unusual. He's dressed in a purple velvet coat and breeches that are covered with gold embroidery. T
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