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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Grammar and sentence structure
Hello,
I just wrote a few sentences and I can't find any problem with them but would appreciate another set of eyes here:
"Moreover, I would like to be associated with a leading participant in Fixed-Income that has earned awards and has introduced financial innovations. Therefore, with XYZ I will be in the heart of an exciting, dynamic field"
Is the grammar okay? am I missing any commas? Does the structure make sense?
I just wrote a few sentences and I can't find any problem with them but would appreciate another set of eyes here:
"Moreover, I would like to be associated with a leading participant in Fixed-Income that has earned awards and has introduced financial innovations. Therefore, with XYZ I will be in the heart of an exciting, dynamic field"
Is the grammar okay? am I missing any commas? Does the structure make sense?
Top answer
Say 'I will be at the heart of. ' Put a full stop at the end. I'm not sure about Fixed-Income.
- Say 'I will be at the heart of.
- ' Put a full stop at the end.
- I'm not sure about Fixed-Income.
- Is that the name of a company or something?
- Rover
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Say 'I will be at the heart of. . .'
Put a full stop at the end.
I'm not sure about Fixed-Income. Is that the name of a company or something?
Rover
Put a full stop at the end.
I'm not sure about Fixed-Income. Is that the name of a company or something?
Rover
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Right - I get it. In that case, no capitalisation is necessary.
Rover
Rover
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